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Deeper Than Family pt 17  
11:04am 13/05/2008
 
 
Fallen Sith Empress
Title: Deeper Than Family
Universe: G1
Rating: PG
Characters: Prowl, Bluestreak, Jazz, OC
Pairings: Jazz/Prowl, eventual Bluestreak/Sunstreaker
Summary: a fic that runs concurrent (in places) to my fic "Days in Avalon". Prowl went out of his was to help the sparkling they had rescued from ruined iacon, only to find out they were family. now he and jazz are trying to raise bluestreak the best they can in the middle of a civil war.



and here's the big build up for the trip to earth. or as much of it as i'm going to deal with in this chapter and the next one.

and, yes, this first section was supposed to be at the end of the last chapter. my bad.



Bluestreak wasn’t sure if they had won their last battle with the Decepticons or not. Megatron’s energon refinery had been destroyed and over two dozen mechs had been deactivated on their side. The whole battle would have been much worse if Ultra Magnus hadn’t managed to mobilize reinforcements for their side.

As it stood, everyone was in the medbay working Ratchet and his staff to death.

The gunner sat in a corner with Sideswipe’s head in his lap, holding a broken fuel line tightly between his fingers to keep the red Twin from going offline from energon loss. Sunstreaker was offline in a medical berth on the opposite side of the room. From where he was sitting, Bluestreak could see Jazz holding Prowl up while one of the junior medics reattached one of his doorwings.

“Can you see Sunny, Blue?” Sideswipe asked tiredly. “Is he okay?”

“He’s offline on a berth. Ratchet was working on him for a while, but he’s alone now.” Bluestreak hoped he didn’t sound as exhausted as he felt; Sideswipe would need all the support he could get for a while yet.

“You’ll tell me if anything changes, right?”

“Yeah. I’ll make sure you know, even if I have to pull you out of recharge.”

“Good. I knew I could count on you.” Sideswipe’s words trailed off as the red Twin fell into recharge.

The sniper hoped his friend wasn’t more badly injured than the medical team had thought when they came in. He didn’t want to think about Sideswipe dying while he was waiting for treatment on the floor of the medbay.

He offlined his own optics and leaned his head against the wall, conserving as much energy as possible while they waited for the medics.

-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-

“Was your team able to find any energy sources at all, Bluestreak?”

The sniper wished he could give Optimus Prime the answer his leader wanted to hear. “No, sir, we didn’t. All we managed to find was a small neutral camp being raided by Decepticons for whatever they had scavenged.”

“Were you able to remove the Decepticon threat from the neutral’s territory?” Optimus looked and sounded weary.

“Yes, sir. But all of us were damaged.” Bluestreak indicated the melted armor plating on his right arm and leg. “I’m on my way to medical after I’ve finished my report.”

“Your diligence is commendable, but your health is more important than a report. I can always come to medical, but not all damage is as obvious as you think.” Optimus pointed at the office door. “You can give me a more detailed written report later. Go get yourself repaired.”

“Yes, sir.” Blue gave the Autobot leader a shy smile. Even if it had been just a scavenging mission, it was the first time Optimus Prime had put him in charge of other Autobots, and he had probably taken the assignment a little too seriously.

He moved to the door, knowing Optimus wouldn’t actually dismiss him unless he was in trouble. He had been so determined to report to Prime when they returned to base, but getting medical seemed like a very long trip now. Tiredly, he stepped out of the doorway and nearly ran into Sunstreaker.

“Slag, Blue, what happened?” the yellow Twin exclaimed.

Bluestreak winced. Sunstreaker was not the mech he wanted to be seeing right now. He didn’t want there to be any anger about what had happened to him, or at the fact that he hadn’t gone straight to medical when he came back on base.

“Decepticons,” the sniper replied. “I’m on my way to medical now.”

Sunny fell into step next to him as he limped toward the medbay. “I hope they look worse.”

Bluestreak nodded. “They took Zigzag back in pieces.”

The melee warrior grinned.

“Don’t look so happy about it,” Blue told him. “You know I don’t like killing.”

“I’m sorry.” Sunstreaker really did look remorseful. “It’s just been us or them for so long, that I’m really glad it was them this time and not you.”

Bluestreak knew that if he continued this topic of conversation, it would eventually lead to a fight, so he said nothing. He didn’t want to fight with Sunstreaker, but it almost always happened if someone else wasn’t around to referee for them.

“Please, don’t be mad, Blue.”

“I’m not. I’m trying not to fight. We always end up fighting when we talk about the war.” He was very careful not to look at the yellow mech as he moved down the corridor.

“Okay. I can take a hint.” Sunstreaker stopped walking. “I’ll leave you alone.”

It took Bluestreak several steps to break his momentum enough to turn around and give the Twin a frustrated look. “That isn’t what I mean. I just don’t want to start fighting with you about something stupid.”

Sunny shook his head. “I don’t want to fight at all. I just—“

Blue waited for the older mech to finish his thought.

“Never mind,” Sunstreaker said. “Can I still walk with you to medical?”

“I think I’d feel better if you did,” the sniper replied, as he felt his damaged leg threaten to give out.

Sunny was beside him quickly enough to catch him before he could fall. With practiced ease, and surprising gentleness, he slung Bluestreak’s arm over his shoulders and supported almost all of the younger mech’s weight.

“I’d carry you, but those doorwings make it awkward unless I’ve got you over my shoulder.”

“How do you know that?” Blue asked as they started down the hall.

“I had to carry Prowl back from a mission in Polyhex once,” the warrior replied. “His processor crashed while we were on a raiding mission. He never did tell us why, though.”

“There are a lot of things he doesn’t want to talk about,” Bluestreak said. “I think some things remind him too much of his family.”

Sunstreaker nodded. “I know about that.”

Bluestreak knew that he did too.
 
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 dark_daebereth
 
04:18pm 13/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
The Escapist: moviejazz
OOooh, I'd like to know more about that Polyhex mission now, but its probably not relevent. :P And the results of the battle at the start... or is that just meant as a snippet of life? Just trying to figure out for myself where everything fits, is all.

Watching Sunny and Blue, it's like morbid fascination. I mean, you know from Days of Avalon that it will turn out alright, but wow, they're realistically painfully awkward. Great, great work!
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 eerian_sadow
 
03:48pm 14/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
Fallen Sith Empress
polyhex, huh? i'll have to think about it. i may end up doing a backstory piece with that. (or it may show up in a backstory piece that i can't talk about until that contest is over) but no, its not really relevant to Deeper Than Family aside from sunny's passing mention of it.

the battle at the begining of the chapter is the aftermath of the big mission they were planning for in the previous chapter. it was long and ugly, and the fact that sideswipe was left on the floor possibly bleeding to death with no one but bluestreak to tend him says just how bad it really was.

and yes, it is a bit of morbid facination watching the two of them. that's how this fic got so damned long! i'm glad that you think its realistic, though. sometimes i worry about that.
 
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 dark_daebereth
 
03:51pm 14/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
The Escapist: jazz
Man, I am really hanging out for this contest piece now. :)

It was more, not where it fit chronologically, but what it was showing us and why, kinda. Like, I like it, I'm just wondering if this is ... foreshadowing?

And yes, that kind of stuff is never easy. You feel bad for all involved even if you are cheering them on.
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 eerian_sadow
 
04:08pm 14/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
Fallen Sith Empress
i bet you are. i have many assurances that its a good piece, and i was encouraged to do an avalon-verse piece for it, so i can't wait to post it.

no foreshadowing though. it was just one of those past events that helped make sunny's relationship with prowl what it is.
 
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 dark_daebereth
 
04:10pm 14/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
The Escapist: jazz
I can't wait for you to post it either. Hope you do well for it.

Okay, I think I'm good now. Just wondered, thanks for that.
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 okami_myrrhibis
 
05:11pm 13/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
VAwitch or Myrrhibis aka Sabrina
I'd like the echo the "request" for elaboration of the Polyhex mission - anything that freezes up Prowl's CPU is usually a story worth telling.

And yay! SS & Blue are finally patching things up!
 
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 dark_daebereth
 
03:53pm 14/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
The Escapist: jazz
Yeah, that was pretty much the drawcard for the Polyhex mission. Prowl crashing. You'd never know we loved him so much, would you, the stuff we put him through? XD
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 eerian_sadow
 
04:09pm 14/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
Fallen Sith Empress
we always abuse the characters we love most. hell, i kill off the characters i love most.
 
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 dark_daebereth
 
04:11pm 14/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
The Escapist: moviejazz
For sure. Angst is win, that's why.
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 eerian_sadow
 
07:03pm 15/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
Fallen Sith Empress
no doubts there.
 
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 eerian_sadow
 
03:53pm 14/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
Fallen Sith Empress
and another vote for the polyhex mission. like i told [info]dark_daebereth, i'll consider a backstory piece for it. but you're right; anything that makes prowl crash is a story worth telling.

Edited at 2008-05-14 03:54 pm (UTC)
 
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 spotlight_noa
 
05:27pm 13/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
spotlight_noa: Sunstreaker - Smirk
Another great chapter! I can't wait for the next part of the story! *snug* I third that request for elaboration on what happened to Prowl.

I'm so hooked on this story. XD Don't leave us hanging too long!
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 eerian_sadow
 
03:57pm 14/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
Fallen Sith Empress
all right, all right. i'll write something for the damned polyhex mission. geeze, you mention something in passing and the fangirls and boys jump on it like fleas on a dog.

;)

i'd actually been considering the backstory anyway; there's not enough prowl/twins interaction out there.

and no hanging! the new chapter is up already!
 
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 cmdrtekk
 
08:32pm 13/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
cmdrtekk
Another great chapter. Looking forward to more.

Can I "fourth" the request for more info on the Ployhex mission? I understand it's probably not relevent to your story, but..
 
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 eerian_sadow
 
03:59pm 14/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
Fallen Sith Empress
you're right, the polyhex mission is in no way relevant to Deeper Than Family, but as its own piece in the avalon universe it is. and i decided with noa's third vote up there that i would do the piece, i just don't know exactly when or where. it may show up in a piece i'm reluctant to discuss until the contest over at [info]tfic_contest for this month is over.
 
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 rageai
 
09:06pm 13/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
'A' is for A.
I know it's sort of off track, but I really smiled at Blue holding Sideswipe on the floor and keeping his fuel line pinched off as they watch Sunny and wait their turn. Non-romantic moment of tenderness...kind of hit my warm fuzzy place. ^_^
 
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 eerian_sadow
 
03:42pm 14/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
Fallen Sith Empress
it was meant to be warm and fuzzy. especially after their almost-fight earlier in the fic.
 
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 mmouse15
 
02:10am 14/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
mmouse
That was marvelous! Love the Blue/Sides interaction in the medbay, and then you go even better with the Blue/Sunny interaction in the hallway. That just rocked! I really love how the two are dancing around each other, and it isn't smooth but oh, so wonderful to see.
 
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 eerian_sadow
 
03:40pm 14/05/2008 (UTC)
 
 
Fallen Sith Empress
glad its working. bluestreak and sideswipe have fitted nicely into each other's best friend slots, but blue and sunny just still aren't sure where they stand with each other. they both want something more than what they have, but they don't know how to approach the other about it. and you're right, their dance absolutely is not smooth, but its as wonderful to write as it is to see.
 
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